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== Resolving hard-to-understand wording == | |||
I couldn't understand what some of the phrases mean, so it would help if you could specify what it is so we can rephrase them. | |||
In japanese is fine | |||
1. Japan Street born while taken over previous world ID | |||
2. station parade |
Revision as of 10:34, 5 August 2024
Events and Contribution section
The Events section should list at least one or two events going on. Something along the lines of "Over the year regular events happen here, notably X and Y", then link to these or just state that a whole calendar is also available on the website afterwards. Currently it reads very much like "go to the website" instead of sharing knowledge on what events actually happen.
For the Contribution section, rewording it to say its a collaborative community project and maybe highlighting how this is accomplished might be better too. I would just adjust these 2 sections if I actually had the knowledge of all the lore, but just wanted to share a good approach here in general. Maebbie (talk) 09:52, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
For event section, it is completely WIP status, planning to add few entry later on so will get add soon.
For Contribution part, I take your idea.
Tony Lewis (talk) 10:02, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
About the order of the page
I think world information(analytics and stuff about development) should be there before the other stuff Especially Akyo, that's going to confuse a lot of people so i'd call on it being on the bottom
You seems forgot to put your name but yeah, it make sense.
As this page is WIP, layout be not yet considered while writing up most part at least.
But I take your idea.
Tony Lewis (talk) 10:33, 5 August 2024 (UTC)
Resolving hard-to-understand wording
I couldn't understand what some of the phrases mean, so it would help if you could specify what it is so we can rephrase them. In japanese is fine
1. Japan Street born while taken over previous world ID 2. station parade